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junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2008-03-16 08:03 PM

I am not sure if i have shared this one here ... i don't think so but here goes anyway

Hugs June xxx
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A fledgling sun surfaced;
staining the horizon yellow,
molten gold ripples on turquoise.
The ocean danced on into dawn;
spirited waves swelling high,
then diving playfully
like sleek mystical beings.
Above a sky of pure blue
enhanced by sunlight,unfiltered, raw -
adds spangled reflections below .
At the shore-line a grand finale,
tired waves gather and squabble,
a tumbling sprint to the sand.
Foam edges like frilly lace;
lick at the shore like tongues,
then melt away softly
in an elegant kiss.

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

1 posted 2008-03-16 08:12 PM

Hi I hope i do this correctly
I wanted to say a big thank you for welcoming me back here so i want to leave this picture as a gift for you all ( use as you wish as it is my own graphic and design so no copyright except my own

thank you pub friends
hugs from June x

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2008-03-16 10:53 PM

Dear June:

I love the poem and it sure conjures up visions of the ocean and the shore.
Nice graphic too and generous of you to share it with all of us. Thanks!

Love
Betty lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2008-03-17 09:50 AM

June i think I would have remembered this one, had I seen it before. It is so marvelously descriptive. Lovely and clever graphic. love, Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-03-17 11:25 AM

SwseetLady~
Your poetic thoughts in this are breathtakingly beautiful~

LOVE the adorable heart graphic too~

How pleased we all are to have you 'home'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2008-03-18 07:43 PM

thank you all
Hugs June x

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

6 posted 2008-03-25 06:24 PM

That is some terrific writing. It is truly beautiful.
Barb

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

7 posted 2008-03-27 01:48 PM

enjoyed...the poem...expressive and very creative...also, enjoyed delving into your heart! RV

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

8 posted 2008-04-02 05:55 PM

a wonderful and descriptive write- I could see this in my mind..I close my eyes and inhale through my nose and I can actually smell the ocean.

Thank you for this moment

kathy

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Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

9 posted 2008-04-02 11:50 PM

beautiful.Vivid picture in my mind. love the read.

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