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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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I am not sure if i have shared this one here ... i don't think so but here goes anyway  Hugs June xxx ------------------------------------- A fledgling sun surfaced; staining the horizon yellow, molten gold ripples on turquoise. The ocean danced on into dawn; spirited waves swelling high, then diving playfully like sleek mystical beings. Above a sky of pure blue enhanced by sunlight,unfiltered, raw - adds spangled reflections below . At the shore-line a grand finale, tired waves gather and squabble, a tumbling sprint to the sand. Foam edges like frilly lace; lick at the shore like tongues, then melt away softly in an elegant kiss. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Hi I hope i do this correctly I wanted to say a big thank you for welcoming me back here so i want to leave this picture as a gift for you all ( use as you wish as it is my own graphic and design so no copyright except my own thank you pub friends hugs from June x  |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear June: I love the poem and it sure conjures up visions of the ocean and the shore. Nice graphic too and generous of you to share it with all of us. Thanks! Love Betty lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
June i think I would have remembered this one, had I seen it before. It is so marvelously descriptive. Lovely and clever graphic. love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SwseetLady~ Your poetic thoughts in this are breathtakingly beautiful~ LOVE the adorable heart graphic too~ How pleased we all are to have you 'home'~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you all Hugs June x |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
That is some terrific writing. It is truly beautiful. Barb |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
enjoyed...the poem...expressive and very creative...also, enjoyed delving into your heart! RV |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
a wonderful and descriptive write- I could see this in my mind..I close my eyes and inhale through my nose and I can actually smell the ocean. Thank you for this moment kathy Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful.Vivid picture in my mind. love the read. |
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