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guyoverthere Member
since 2007-08-12
Posts 58 |
Upon closer inspection The image is just a little Disconcerting The reflection seems Jaundiced Gaunt Just a trace of sadness In those uneasy cheeks There is a silent honesty In mirrors That betrays the many truths We so desperately strive To conceal With clothes And gadgets With accessories And makeup An honesty Tucked away like old photographs Behind the pupils |
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guyoverthere Member
since 2007-08-12
Posts 58 |
I'm new here. Hoping someone could show me the ropes? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You seem to have the hang of it. Everyone writes, everyone reads, everyone answers each other or there is no point to it. Welcome. Joyce |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
agree with joyce...welcome...you have arrived! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~and I forgot to "welcome" you~~ in CA M |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
like bubbles in fermenting brew this poem rises to top... i give it a positive, a-1 review! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
very nicely done |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Welcome, I think you will enjoy this site. I really liked your poem, hope to see more. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Welcome to the site and hope you enjoy it. I liked your poem and it's definitely the truth. Mirrors are relentlessly truthful! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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