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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-09-30 09:38 PM




I was born from the earth
And I was forged by rivers
So When I look at my scars
I can see what I have lost

But this blue Sky above me
It was there for me to touch



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1 posted 2006-10-01 09:41 PM


And I hope you reach it.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2006-10-03 03:25 AM


Very interesting write you have here. I enjoyed it.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Juju
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3 posted 2006-10-04 03:59 PM


Thank you,

-Juju

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Songbird
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4 posted 2006-10-19 03:01 AM


I like this alot..you have a great style.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-10-19 07:50 AM


One tall sky...

the possibilities are limitless!

Build your ladder high JuJu.

Don_Juan
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6 posted 2006-11-06 10:58 PM


I agree with Songbird. You have a grand style.

and, always, it seems, you floor me with your poems.

"But this blue sky above me
It was there for me to touch."

wow. And even though mountains are beaten by rain and wind, they continue to stretch for the heavens.

thanks for sharing,
-John

nice use of muffin



Juju
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7 posted 2006-11-08 01:48 AM


Thank you so much for your replies.  This is a bad week so forgive my lack of replies. I love you all

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

pegasus111
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8 posted 2006-11-09 07:24 PM


a tasty tidbit...thanks for sharing.The scars disturb me however. . Peace dear lady
Juju
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9 posted 2006-11-11 10:27 AM


I have it on video now
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7WR3EKH4jWA

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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