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0 posted 2006-09-29 07:38 PM



It seems as though
for just one hour
We were the best of friends
Nothing could ever tear us apart
We’d be together till the end

I never knew quite what I had
But I guess it doesn’t matter now
I’ll never ask you why
But I’d like to ask you how

How could you take me for granted?
I was always there for you
I still am, even though
our friendship’s no longer true blue

I don’t agree with the choice you made
Or the influence you’re under
The way we’ll be
Because of each other
Is really something to ponder

I’ll never forget our friendship
Any of the good times we had
I’m going to miss the you I knew
I have just one more question
Before after just two years we part
You know that this will hurt me more than you
And believe me now it’s true.
Are you someone else now?
Or are you still the you I knew?



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1 posted 2006-09-30 12:32 PM


truly amazing words good write...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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2 posted 2006-09-30 09:29 PM


I understand this poem well.  Good write.

-Juju

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