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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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Virginia, USA

0 posted 2007-06-21 12:04 PM




I appreciate your extreme lack of doubt
Although I'm pretty sure there's no easy way out
Thats no reason to think that its all over now
I have to believe
And then find a way how

I don't remember the truths that I buried alive
I was fine while I thought nothing would survive
Now its back and there's only me left to blame
But I'd to do it all again
And let it turn out the same

I can't further explain what I'm feeling inside
Thats the nature of things we nurture and hide
Its not impossible that to rise is to fall
There has to be a dream
If there's nothing at all

© Copyright 2007 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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1 posted 2007-06-21 11:48 PM


I like any form of conflict hehe..
Enjoyed reading this

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2007-06-22 05:37 AM


We all have skeletons that we hide in our mental "closets". Some get buried so deeply and for so long that if they should surface they surprise and confuse us. Well done Bob.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2007-07-09 11:44 AM


Glad to see you here Bob with a well penned poem.  Joyce
jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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California, U.S.A.
4 posted 2007-07-09 08:36 PM


This poem reminds me of the trouble I had in making certain decisions that would change my life for the better.  It was so easy to stay in this same place until I realized I was in a circle.  It is very well executed and I give it a 10.

Hugs Kimberly


BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
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5 posted 2007-07-11 08:05 PM


It's so true. I really enjoyed reading this, and i can relate. Very nice write

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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