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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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0 posted 2007-05-14 09:22 PM


I look at you and what do I see?
Cheeks inflated as if stung by a bumblebee,
You have blissful hands,
Sensitive hands,
Hands that cut through darkness and pull me into the light,
A beautiful girl like you,
You have to be Ms. Right.

Rocks and clusters of metal wrapped around every crack and line can only form a smile ever so divine.
We’re rich girl, we have millions,
With those two flawless sapphires that grow under your eyelids and that treasure chest that contains those thirty-two pearls,
What’s funny is the key to that chest, is merely a simple joke.
Because that simple joke provokes a smile,
And that beautiful smile takes me up to heaven for a while.

You see,
Beauty doesn’t define you,,
You’re not part of beauty’s nature,
You are beauty’s nature, and it is beauty you define.

© Copyright 2007 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

1 posted 2007-08-09 11:27 PM


the title took me back to the '70's and the carley simon song, "you're so vain"...believe if a woman reads your poem she won't respond out of fear of her own vanity...women are like that, you know! hope you return and share more of your poetry.
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