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Dream Catcher (a terzanelle)
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Dream Catcher (a terzanelle) |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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I gaze in childlike awe at clear blue skies then run barefoot, carefree on sandy beach to catch a dream elusive as the tides. The gulls fly low, its wings I almost reach, I spread my arms as one who flies with them, then run barefoot, carefree on sandy beach. A pebble on the sand, my only gem to throw against the waves as gulls watch me – I spread my arms as one who flies with them. I listen to the crashing surf with glee, forget my blues as I pick up more stones, to throw against the waves as gulls watch me. Sunlit clouds cover my twilight zones, I soak my toes at water’s edge, shivering, forget my blues as I pick up more stones. My dark emotions slowly disappear, I gaze in childlike awe at clear blue skies, I soak my toes at water’s edge, shivering, to catch a dream elusive as the tides |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like this. This form is new to me. I'll have to analyze it and see if I can write one. I just got home this hour after being gone for more than a week. My email is full and I had to catch up on this corner right away. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear jjote: This is quite an unusual form and I like the picures you have created with it. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
this is very pretty, I`m not a form writer, but I do like the content..Vincent |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks, guys. I'm just experimenting. About terzanelles, you could try these sites: http://allpoetry.com/column/784852 http://allpoetry.com/poem/2629218 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The terzanelle is not an easy form to capture, but you have done it quite well here. Loved the thoughts woven into this one! |
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