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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Unchained ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Unchained Word thoughts cascade Splashing joy in abound Now found in rivulets weaving Their way to the soul of serenity Compelling you to come along Riding the waves of joy Rapturously Unchained~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it. Another "Unchained Melody"  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, you are so good at writing these. But, that doesnt surprise me. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis "Compelling you to come along Riding the waves of joy" Who would not if they could.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loving this Marge.. I'm with Loper..reminded me of Unchained Melody. Love you, Nance In the midst of winter, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I also thought of Unchained Melody. Love it Marge |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
such a delicate rendering. Love, Joyce |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge, This is a joyous poem. It made me feel good. Thank you for your talent. Hugs Kimberly |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
Marge, I have a friend who write in so many different styles, I love reading them. Vincent |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Exquisitely done!! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks friends ... I love the gentleness of the Rictameter format ... a nice challenge to jumpstart your day ! Give it a try ? 2- syllable word begins it (not two WORDS .. 2 SYLLABLES) 4 - syllable next line 6 - syllable line 8 - syllable line 10- syllable line 8 6 4 2 - ending up with the same two syllable word you began with Come on ... play with me ! Circles of love Abounding in the joy Of holding hands with all of you Knowing that the chain is made much stronger With each link of hands clasped in love This poetic circle Is family Friendly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This really strikes the senses! You are so cool! (are we supposed to say that after a certain age?) Love, Barb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Feel better dear friend. ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
such an upbeat soul! and clever too. loved this the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
enjoyed the poem, "unchained" and picture of your red-lored, vanna. i have a 13 year old african grey named, jaco. she is a real sweetie. |
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