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0 posted 2006-09-19 01:57 AM



When I feel this way,
I only think of holding you tight,
Don’t tell me that you don’t feel the same,
If only you could kiss me tonight,
I could sleep, having you in my dreams,

You touched my heart; this romance has me in a trance,
I never thought I would feel this way again, ever,
But this love is back, this crush I have for you is wild,
What I feel inside, from you I dare not hide,

Yea baby, let’s walk outside tonight,
And let the rain make our love come alive,
It’s up to you to take this chance,
Tomorrow might never come; all we have is now,
Take my hand and take this walk, be with me,

Can’t you read through my eyes, the fire that speaks,
My lips can’t say what my heart feels, it’s surreal,
Surrender yourself to your soul’s desire,
Let us kindle this spark into a fire.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-09-19 10:21 AM


I hope this is a new girl who inspired such eloquence.  Joyce
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2 posted 2006-09-19 09:59 PM


I like this alot.

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riet
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3 posted 2006-09-22 09:22 AM


The feeling of love. This are moments one will want to hold on too. The words are so sweet.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-09-22 10:40 AM


sweet write!
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