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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina 
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I Like All My Love Rally to this other existence that has all the blood types of heads and livers standing on their toes wanting more and less like a woman in the smacky sack with a sensitive, effeminate male. Where are the plates? Couldn’t even give a damn, but guerillas on swing sets enjoying basking, wasting and general paste-eating in the sun are my friends and they love me. Maybe then just try to like your killer when he or she may be upon your behind waiting for the yelp to emit out your mouth sounding the fury of hardy killing and excessive time wasting in this world of unknowing; ignorant of everything groovy. If hair grew out me eyeballs; I want stroking damn it. Eat it like black pasta and get some snagged in your teeth. Look me straight in the head like a deformity call me something I'm not, John Merrick. And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone." |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Too different for you people? Figured... Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Okay, it is over my head - but I still like reading your work. I am not always clear what the hell you are talking about - but I still like it. What I think brings me back to your poems is how the words flow and how you use them. You create some interesting images in my head. A |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Too different I guess. I just don't understand. Joyce |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Danke... Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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minus Member
since 2007-03-24
Posts 75 |
ya...i just take it as it is, man...this is a great poop! did you edit it much, or did it just all fall out? i aspire to do versions of this, though am not quite ready to share... |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
It all came out at about nine pages. I wrote it after being awake for 82 hours, like most of my work. After I snatched a nap, I read it and didn't even remember writing it that much. So yes, this is the edited version. Domo arigato. And what do you mean you want to do revisions? Just curious. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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JohnnyWood New Member
since 2007-03-26
Posts 8 |
I enjoyed the visuals extensively, and I think I've grasped somewhat of a meaning but I'd rather not be too quick to jump the gun (this being my 5th post and all)... Good thought-provoking read. Kudos. |
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minus Member
since 2007-03-24
Posts 75 |
no i mean i aspire to meeting something the quality of the last stanza--something completely gorgeous when someone reads it in their head. that no sleep thing really puts things into perspective. do you do that on purpose to generate insanity, or is it a byproduct of your world? |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I wouldn't go as far as to say that I'm insane. I actually think I'm quite normal. And no I don't stay awake on purpose. My head is full of very strange thoughts to begin with so I don't think lack of sleep generates the thoughts but rather intensifies them. Call it a drug I suppose. But no, I'd love to just lay down and sleep, but that's not something I can do. Thanks. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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JeffD Junior Member
since 2007-02-06
Posts 28CT |
First off I have to say I like your poem a lot but cannot fully understand it. I understand about no sleep intensifying your thoughts. I have the same thing happen to me. |
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minus Member
since 2007-03-24
Posts 75 |
by insanity i mean somehow set apart from majority rule--not clinically. insomnia sucks, and i am glad you do not smoke meth. |
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