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Reasons for Secrets
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Reasons for Secrets |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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No one knows how I feel Because I won’t tell them I refuse to tell them I have my reasons for secrets That maybe aren’t reasons at all I’m watching in blind desperation As my heart is nailed to the wall There for everyone to see Exactly what makes me ‘me’ All of my secrets Should remain hidden But nailed to the wall, Of dignity ridden Oh, foolish hearts Knowledge desire When more appropriate is fear They don’t know how I’ll feel When they know What they wanted to know …I hope they’ll be afraid…. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Ahh it iz not always the best to keep secrets sometimes it iz guud to let things out Krysti |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Everybody has something to hide, or to laugh about in secret. That's what a secret is. Personally, I write down my secrets and forget about them. I usually end up finding them and turning them into poems. (Lol) Good poem. Can't say I understand completely. I'm a better liar than a secret-keeper. Haha...Believe that if you will. -Andrew We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
it felt a little of beat at points but it might be cause there is a little kid screaming in the background. i think the ending was quite as strong as it could be. i really do like the subject though. secrets are things that can hurt or suprise in a good way. its all in the eye of the beholder. i really did like it though. -jenna |
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