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So Alone
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I guess it's kinda wrong That I'm waitin and prayin for something to happen Even if it goes sorta kinda wrong I'm not used to sittin and waitin Always gotta be in the action Whatever action that there is I'm yawnin and silently screamin My stereos bleedin My parents are a little more than in my face Don't they get that I need my space Tryin' to find my place Can't do this on my own And yet here I am So alone |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow, hey i'm new here you can call me red. loved it pen, i loved that last part. the feeling behind it was so apparent. and i liked the part abvout your parents in your face. loved it passionatly. maybe that's why this place is called passions in poetry. lol -Red I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around untill I found your heart. I ripped it out and tore it apart while saying 'You don't need th |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this was a good write but i must say it wasn't my favourite of yours it seemed i don't know rough is how i think i would put it |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Can't do this on my own And yet here I am So alone~ Wow Pen this is my fav part it was amazing I know that feeling so well. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
WOW. I really love this, the emotion and idea behind it. Really, really good job! I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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