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Teen Poetry #8

You're beautiful Love

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-06-05 11:33 PM

baby, you're so beautiful to me,
why can't everybody else see,
I love you with every inch of my heart,
and it kills me each day we're apart,

Everytime I look into your eyes,
I feel my heart fill up with butterflies,
Now, when I am away from you,
I feel so lost, I don't know what to do,

So kiss me like you said you would,
I'll kiss you back like I know I should,
Then we can sit and watch the sun rise.
And again I will get lost in your eyes.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-06-06 10:44 AM

Oh it was beautiful!! I loved how you put so much emotion into it! hope to see more soon

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-06-11 09:33 PM

wandering child (fyi, your most likely older than i am) wither so art thou lost? why on earth are you all lost. find love and you will find yourself. beautiful word though, thanks for those. i love reading them

-Reddetta

I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore

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