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When I Met Her
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When I Met Her |
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Smiling Junior Member
since 2007-05-27
Posts 12Barbados |
I'll be honest I'll admit it I was once daft and shallow My smile was a snide smirk in disguise Malevolent and hollow I cared nothing for love after all chilavry is dead I jus wanted to brag to my friend about how i made it to first base with her on the first night instead My friend and I were all alike :corrupters of love for our own delight We all thought we were "players" of this great yet challenging game There was nothing great about cheating on someone Our "games" were inhumane But... But... Wait ... Stop... Evil is not borned it is comething that is developed I developed it from the same heartache that i now strive to cause yes indeed my heart was walked over without the slightest pause I met her at a get-together of sorts i was there with my "back-then girlfreind" i really thought she was amazing and i was ready to put an end to this "game" i was playing she was amazing indeed the gestures i made to her weren't the "moves " of a player they were expressions of genuine affection sincere and clear Though the girl i'm talking about now at that time did not have such an effect on me , she had only heinous words to spread while she made fun at me After that evening me and "Miss amazing " broke up people told me i deserved it after all what went around came back around It was right there and then i buried the remnants of my heart in the ground Three months Later while browsing the messenger i found myself in a very emotional conversation with the girl from before nto the one that broke my heart but the one that made fun of me it would seem she had developed an "intrest " in me We talked for months all the while i found myself falling for her i tried to fight the feeling but she was everything i wanted Dangerous Spontaneous with her i thought i could make a relationship that was continuious It was a year since we got together she was at my place , staring into space then there it came from out of the blue : "Kevin do you love me ? Because i love you" I looked into her face I couldn;t say it my heart was long gone Buried underneath bitter sand and stone I looked into her face when it came to love i was a disgrace But to me love was a weasel word for which i had no place she left the house and i could feel her affction slip away well i did it again Sigh Love had got away Smiling |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I liked the thoughts in this but near the end it seemed a bit skewed and the flow wasn't the same. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i liked it but i found the same thing that hunnie did that near the end it was not the same as the beginning |
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