My Final Goodbyes (Last Poem)

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RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-05-09 04:15 AM

My Final Goodbyes My Last Poem

It’s hard to say goodbye when you wish you wasn’t going
Buts harder to live life with the possibility of never ever knowing
If this was all I could become, some tired Aussie chick
Worn, under loved and forever feeling sick
Its so hard to get tired and make yourself stay awake
When deep down your so frightened of making another huge mistake

It’s time for me to go now, I have served my purpose
Created poems that are magical and forever surplus
So now close my eyes and dream a million dreams
Now that I know life isn’t what it seems
So I’ll close this door and open up another
And I’m going on a holiday with my beloved mother

This isn’t all you hear of this Aussie word spinner
You never even know she might show up for dinner
Her spirit will live to those young and old
Her poems cherished and then again told

Goodbye!!!

P.S: I have made so many friends here and i'm greatful for all the support i have recieved from all the member here at PIP.. My best friend Phoebe now has and account here (TooYoungToBeFeral) she actually taught me to write so there you go. You can ask her how im going if you like.. im sure she wouldn't mind replying every now and then.. ANYWAY.. Goodbye and Goodluck to you all in the future..

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

1 posted 2007-05-09 01:01 PM

Beautiful goodbye, love. I've always enjoyed your poems and will read them again and again.. God bless you and goodluck hun

I'm sorry about your loss again, and will pray that God gives you the strength you need.

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2007-05-10 03:23 PM

Beautiful goodbye, I am sad you are leaving. Stay strong and keep writing even if not here. Maybe one day you will come back, if you do we will be here.

[email protected]

FROM TIME TO TIME if you keep writing send me a poem that your wrote or something.
Good luck.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-05-11 12:11 PM

that was an amazing poem and an even more amazing good bye i am said to see you leave it was good reading your poems

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2007-05-11 05:19 PM

wordspinner....tear tear

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

5 posted 2007-05-14 10:08 PM

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