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lustforgood
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since 2008-01-01
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singapore, singapore

0 posted 2008-01-02 08:34 AM


When shutting up quicken the world
When dealing problems makes head twirl
I can't believe how life is taken granted
If we can control time and not being relented.

He had saw his future, how great it will
His kids love him after all the time he kills
For us to see and for us to realise
That family is one big importance in life.

So he had saw how he overcome
The stress in life that had yet to come
Patience aren't perfect, so aren't we
Fast forwarding life isn't what you'll bear see

Inspiration by the movie: Click

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