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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
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washington, US

0 posted 2008-01-01 04:50 PM


this is a bit rough and i cant get the rythm right. its in dire need of help.


would you come take an adventure with me?
or would you flee?
will we plunge deep into my secrets
then ride my emotional roller coaster
take a walk through my valley of dreams
climb my mountain of flaws and disabilities
you will get to know the real me

taking this quest could endanger your life
you will feel the pain i have felt because of that knife
you will see things as i have always known them
you will know the knowledge i hold
this quest could days months or years
who knows if you will even survive

would you take an adventure with me?
you will get to know the real me
would you try to fall in love with me?

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