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Teen Poetry #8

You Say

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-04-16 12:36 PM

you say you wanna kiss me,
outside in the rain,
you say you want me in your arms,
so you can take away my pain,

everytime you say "I love you",
my heart melts even more,
and then I get this feeling,
one I can't ignore,

Now every night I dream,
of your beautiful green eyes,
and I think I figured out this feeling,
it's only butterflies,

So tonight I'll go to sleep,
dreaming only of you,
and the moment I can finally say,
babe I love you too.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-04-16 05:43 PM

beauty in words♥

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2007-04-17 07:22 AM

mmmm lovely!!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-04-17 09:24 AM

awwww...

this is really great! great flow and rhythm...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-04-18 12:17 PM

thank you all for you're replies...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

vexx
Junior Member

since 2007-04-20

Posts 14
denmark/bornholm

5 posted 2007-04-20 10:58 AM

it hold the words i never get said to my love...maybe i can use this as an incourgement...thanks...its beautiful

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

6 posted 2007-04-21 05:18 PM

This was a reallly cute poem.I missed this site, I haven't been on in way too long

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