Teen Poetry #8 |
Tranquil oblivion (post #2) |
Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
The pain our hearts might feel.... When the light from the sun fades, And you are taken into the darkness, Come; join me, as we dance, Without our bonds, Dance in the moon light. The golden thread that binds my heart to his, Must snap, before the silken ribbon twist, It’s self around my heart… and turns to leaden chains, Pulling me head first tumbling into the darkness, Of the newly reviled ravine. I must let go… release my bond, The river calls to me, sings of the wonder, Her dark waters hold, I long to immerse my Mind, Soul, and Heart, Within the sanctuary of her peaceful waters. To hear the stories of the ocean, Powerful and ruled by his queen I long to float among the harmonious tides, To feel the lull and numbing quiet. To hear my heart, and what I desire. I crave the tranquil oblivion, of the nothingness, The chill of the casket, made with ice, That surrounds my heart. The key long lost, and forgotten. But no, I must, I need to, I desire to, Immerse my self in the stream instead, To feel the light rain kissing my face, To feel the wind rise from the cliffs, Spreading my wings, whipping my hair. I hunger for, the understanding, Of which the minds of many, Filled with compassion may give to me. To be, understood by those I respect, To know, that I am alive, To know that I belong, somewhere. I wish to share the love of which I feel, Towards life and all it represents. To share my knowledge, And wisdom of experience, within my past, To share my fears and yet, Not scare them with my nightmares. I need, long, wish, desire, hunger and crave, To be set free, to feel the tides of emotion, Crashing over me to carry my thoughts on wings, To soar above the cliff, I will live and you, you may hurt me, But I will always dance in the moon light, Throw off my shackles, For I, I am… Free. The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow Beckie you are posting in Teen wow I am surprised good to see you arounnd hunn Hugs Krysti |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
wooooow...that was world class...bravo!!!! |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I am left speechless...hat's off to you. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Hunnie i am a teen right? Thanks all and i rather like it. Abbeon The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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