its not right - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #8

its not right

um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

0 posted 2007-04-07 12:52 PM

this was suppose to be a small thing
you could barly even call a fling
but now im falling for you
and so are you
i tell myself its not true
but my heart says i love you
we both no its not right
when we hold each other tight
my hearts not yours to hold
like yours its already been sold

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-04-09 10:05 PM

I liked this I can relate to it thats for sure.. go with your gut though what ever feels right...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

carter89
New Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 5

2 posted 2007-04-10 01:47 AM

damn i loved your poem girl i can deffinitley relate on the subject i look forward to reading more of your poems in the near future , keep writing

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.