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Teen Poetry #8

When we were together

tinker_bell123
New Member

since 2006-04-15

Posts 3
Colorado, USA

0 posted 2007-03-29 12:24 PM

Thinking of his eyes
His lips
His amazing smile
The sound of his voice
The cute way he whispered
I love you baby
When he talked to me on the phone
When he was in his own room, a l o n e.
But when he was with his friends, "The Jocks",
He would march straight up to me and say,
I love you so much and you mean the world to me!!
How much he used to love me.
How much I still love him.
Thinking of the way he used to call at night to say,
Goodnight baby. I love you.
Thinking of the way it was
When we were
t o g e t h e r
<3

~*~Think Tink~*~

tinker_bell123
New Member

since 2006-04-15

Posts 3
Colorado, USA

1 posted 2007-03-29 12:25 PM

Well there it is.
MY FIRST POEM!
w00t.

~*~Think Tink~*~

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-04-01 11:55 PM

Well I'd have to say you are so lucky. I mean I wish all guys were like that. Well Welcome to Passions I liked this great first post...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

tinker_bell123
New Member

since 2006-04-15

Posts 3
Colorado, USA

3 posted 2007-04-06 11:49 PM

Thanks a ton Hunnie.
I fail at poetry!!!

Chelster <3

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