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Teen Poetry #8

The complications of us

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2007-02-27 07:15 PM

I hate how I love you.

I don’t like how I like you.
I don’t like how much I care.
The way I feel about you,
Is beyond the mean of words to share.

I don’t like the way you can make me smile,
Or the way I just can’t stay mad at you,
I hate the way you know the truth in my lies,
And the way you can explain everything I do.

I hate the way you carry my heart
The way that you know just what to say,
I hate the way your words in the morning
Have come to make or break my day.

I hate the way you have cute little names
That make me smile each time they’re said,
Or the way that you can see beyond my words
And understand things you’ve never read.

But I don’t.

I love the way you make me feel,
And how you make me smile,
I love the way you make every pain
Seem in the end so worthwhile.

I love every aspect of what we are,
And the way “us” just feels so right,
I love the way you show you care
With text messages late at night.

I love how one message can make my day,
And how you know me through and through,
I love the way you understand
And I love the way I love you.

And that scares me.

-Erin

idk not my best, i haven't written in awhile so thought I would. Have the inspiration.

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

Tell me what you think about being open, about being honest with yourself.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-02-27 11:34 PM

hmmmm I acually didn't think it was your worst, I liked the flow and the simplicity yet depth, if that makes sense. But it was good...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

2 posted 2007-03-07 06:42 PM

for real it was good the flow was nice and i like how you wrote it, i know how you feel sometimes with my man i feel the same way

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