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Sometimes_I_Google_Myself
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since 2007-01-27

Posts 3
Austrailia

0 posted 2007-02-13 07:13 PM

I've never claimed to be real bright,
I know I'm an imbecile.
But even I don't know how I did it,
How I did something so goddam vile.
I had a good reason, but it's no excuse,
For putting you through this pain.
And now I know you have moved on,
Not knowing is driving me insane.

So I'm baring my soul, everything that I've got,
And I hope to God you see.
That no matter what I've done or said,
Please forgive me, I'm begging you,
Baby, I'm down on my knees.

You have every right to hate me,
And I know even that's asking too much.
Because though I'd like to love you again,
I know you may shy from my touch.
I can't sleep at night anymore,
I'm an unreachable zombie all day.
I feel like throwing myself off a bridge
For having treated you this way.

So I'm baring my soul, everything that I've got,
And hope to God you see.
That no matter what I've done or said,
Please forgive me, I'm begging you,
Baby, I'm down on my knees

I'd walk on water for you, my love,
And I'll make you trust me again.
If you'll take back my sorry hide,
I'll be only the best boyfriend.
I tried living without you,
And that was for your own good.
And I know it's impossible,
Even though I know I should.

I know what I did was wrong,
You have every right to tell me to back off.
But I was trying to protect you,
In my own twisted way, or lack thereof.
You're the sun that sets on my earth,
My whole live revolves around you.
I want you to see, I need you to know,
What I'm telling you now is true.

So I'm baring my soul, everything that I've got,
And hope to God you see.
That no matter what I've done or said,
Please for give me, I'm begging you,
Baby, I'm down on my knees

The only reason I'd let you fall is because I want to catch you.

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

1 posted 2007-02-13 08:13 PM

wow Jason- it was . . . something i'd want a guy to say to me. it's obvious you care alot and i can feel it reading the words, so the only pitiful word i can say is
incredible

for light was all that was left after dark
the only thing that ever kept us apart

-Whitt

Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness.

-Sir Gawain

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2008-10-14 09:46 PM

i'm late, but this is really good.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-10-15 10:26 AM

Wow.. I have to admit to ya' Jason. This poem was simply remarkable. I mean your emotions just poured out of this piece of work. And in my opinion is true poetry. Great work. Btw your poem sounded more like a song.. and that song was beautiful.

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

4 posted 2008-10-17 04:27 AM

as i read this one i really thought i'm reading some lyrics of a song...lol
but this is great. i enjoyed this one. nice job.

~~*K. B.*~~

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