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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
Boys would tell you this just to get you to do that that’s just the bottom line but when you tell them your having their baby they say it ain’t mine this happened just by having one night of pleasure That’s lead to 9 months of pain and 3 days away from home with a baby to name now you walking around with a baby, holding your head down knowing you are the only one to blame thinking that one kiss lead to this feeling of shame while boys out have all the fun girls get left with yall daughter or son you might think I’m being funny but take my advice don’t lay down if you not ready to pay the price, and sacrifice |
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fanatic-flyer Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 26Bournemouth |
wow, that is good, very hard hitting and true. I like it Thanks for everything, because everything makes the world happy =) |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
THANKS... I MEAN TO BE HONEST IN MOST CASES IT DOES BE LIKE THIS. I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT! FTR...ALLDAii!! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really liked this, first time I've seen you around so welcome to Passions.. hope to read more... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Welcome to PIP... and i hope you enjoy your stay.. i know exactly where your coming from this.. I have and am in a similar position... And i know how hard it is.. Anyway Good Write! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey, Welcome to the teen forum of passions! Glad to see a couple new faces, seems like every time I log online I see new people with wonderful poetry. I hope you enjoy your stay with us Enjoyable poem; your right, this kind of thing happens all the time and I like how you said in the poem that you need to take responsibilites. Thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading more of your work "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
WELL I'M UNDER THE IMPRESSION THAT YOUR THINKIN MII POEM IS ABOUT ME. NO ITS NOT, I JUST SEE MORE AND MORE TEENS GETTING INTO SITUATION, THEY COULD HAVE AVOIDED. AND THIS SEEM LIKE THE ONE THAT HIT ME MOST. BUT THNKS TO ALL... FTR...ALLDAii!! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Ummm... Actually I admit that I didn't think this poem was about you... but... umm... still, good write "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
0H...THANKS! |
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dctalk1129 New Member
since 2007-02-08
Posts 3 |
Hey, I like it a lot. I know exactly where u are coming from, my favorite line was "one night of pleasure can lead to nine months of pain". Good job, check out my poem, its "What If?" |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
Wow...thanks!! That happens to be one of my favorite lines too. thank you all for welcoming me!! FTR...ALLDAii!! |
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