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Don't Corrupt Our Fairytales
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Don't Corrupt Our Fairytales |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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With all the fairytale writing going on in here.. i couldn't help but add my two cents worth.. lol.. Anyway here goes.. Don't Corrupt Our Fairytales Don’t corrupt my innocence and don’t listen to me cry Don’t wait around for miracles when you know pigs will never fly Fairytales are not mythical they never were you see You can’t make them disappear because they should be real to you and me Don’t say there is no such thing as a happy ending It takes some time to find a heart that is slowly mending God will only give us as much pain we can handle You may think it’s the end for you but you just need to take a gamble Take a gamble on your everyday life Get married and be a man’s lucky wife Go holidaying in Fiji or Christmas Island’s too You never know you might end up owning a petting zoo You could be a millionaire or a homeless man at sea But we all live fairytale lives and I’m happy to be me Live the life you want to live and find your happy ending Don’t go around corrupting fairytales when lies are all you’re sending Your castle is the place where you will feel complete Your prince is the man that sits with you and gently rubs your feet We all live in fairytales that why we must believe Because fairytales are the only bit of magic in life we do receive… |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
beautiful- i loved these lines especailly "Your castle is the place where you will feel complete Your prince is the man that sits with you and gently rubs your feet We all live in fairytales that why we must believe Because fairytales are the only bit of magic in life we do receive…" magic. it made the ending tear worthy. you go Aussie! you rock my socks! (isn't that so american? i picked it up from an american friend and thought it so cute!) Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
LOL... I actually liked it myself..i know im weird to like my own work.. Us Aussie know how to stick it and we stick it well.. IT WAT WE'RE GOOD AT... |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
woot! Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness. |
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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
this poem is oh so tru, good write i like it |
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