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she won't cry
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nick_lyss Member
since 2006-08-21
Posts 88 |
she won't cry You can see the anger that lies in her heart that was once full of love. The madnees inside of her has corrupt her innoncence. She won't cry. She is tired od crying. The smile that she wears is just a diguise that nonone can see the real her. but still she won't cry. They won't cry either. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
reminds me of a poem someone wrote last year..i loved that poem. It was called "she won't cry" too! i liked this one courtney..it was really short, but i liked it. can't wait to read more:] and i hope you are doing alright! |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
i liked this. It showed a lot of feeling. You need to spell check it though. |
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carter89 New Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 5 |
yeah this is true about you (only a friend would know right) times have changed but good poem keep writing. |
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