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You Stole My Heart (My 3000th Post!)
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You Stole My Heart (My 3000th Post!) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry 
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Well, I've been on hiatus from this site for quite a while, but I'm back now! There's lots of new faces here, especially in the teen forum, so I thought I'd just say hello to all of you.  With this being my 3,000th post I thought I'd post a poem I've written recently. Enjoy.  I was only a kid back then, We used to tease and play. But then something happened, On a typical Saturday. I don't know quite what it was, But in you I saw something new. You stole my heart that Saturday, And I don't know what to do. I realized that you cheered me up, Every time I was feeling down. I don't know how you did it, But somehow you got rid of my frown. And when my world turned upside-down, You were there to lend a hand. Acting so sweet and wonderful, Through all my great demands. You've never seemed to judge me, Even when I'm feeling gray. You help make my world wonderful, Each and every day. You'll always be in my thoughts, Even if we're far apart. Ever since that fateful day, When you stole my heart. |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
awww it's good to see you back! I really loved how you ended this one, it just fit. Very sweet poem, something I think a lot of people can relate too. Great job!  AIM-beatufu1tragidy |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
hello=) im not new new here but i've never replied to your post, but i can say this "your poem is absolutely wonderful!" and thats all i can say! and i mean it! -missy |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi *Alli4000*, Yes, welcome back, I know that you probably don't remember me but I've always appreciated that you've taken the time to comment on so many of my poems, now I just want to return the favor!  This poem was awesome; especially the flow, the flow was one of the best parts of the poem. Plus I liked how you called it a, "typical Saturday", that part just seems to add a whole lot to the entire poem, for me. Thanks so much for sharing this piece! I hope to see more of your poems in the near future "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allison~ Congratudarnlations sweetie~ Keep on inking ... you're a wonderful poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
sweetness on the piece. really made my day to read it and i thought it was great. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congrats on 3,000 posts, Alli! It has been our treat to have you as a member and active Deputy Moderator! |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i like this it's so...sweet, the whole poem flowed really well and i loved the end: You'll always be in my thoughts, Even if we're far apart. Ever since that fateful day, When you stole my heart |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow i loved that it had a nice flow and good job on your 3000 post... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
allie! yeah we have all been hiding out for a loooooong time! ive missed you and this site. talk to chris much anymore? |
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