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Teen Poetry #8

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um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

0 posted 2007-01-16 11:06 PM

i walk in the door
and tell myself it`ll be alright
but in my mind all the flash backs store
i remember all the fights
sitten there tellin them it`ll be ok
in my mind hopin and prayin
we`d all live to see another day
for now thats all i have to say

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-01-18 12:40 PM

I liked this It was short but it had a lot of understood feeling in there for me...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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