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The Purest of Truths
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The Purest of Truths |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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"The Purest of Truths" It's every little girl's dream to be swept off her feet by her knight in shining armor brandishing his sword charismatically fighting his way to her heart his princely demeaner, perfection's shining light But no one is perfect, it's human nature to flounder and sink in the water, vunerible to defeat but as long as you rebel and struggle against the flow perfection's ideal is too plastic to concieve Don't get me wrong, the laudened hero's virtues aren't bleak but it's impossible to be society's consimate pet personalities do clash and tempers do flare so this generic facade will soon wither away No more will this hypothetical dream manipulate your mind Instead you'll decide your fate with a love so unique you see everyone is different, their hearts aren't alike so search for that grail and ignore the devil's beck and call Because than you can find your ideal love with his charectoristic quirks and an individual flare to light up your eyes and rev up your soul breathing life with each kiss into the shrouded black holes In turn becoming a little slice of perfection's pie maintaining the qualities so pure and true channeling a little bit of that cliched knight passionately expressing perfection's individuality |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
that is really good. i can't think of a thing that could be better. its very strong. very nice job. Jessica |
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