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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
Can you read me anymore? Can you tell? I’m and standing by the door You looked when I fell It hurts to know You don’t love me anymore It hurts to know In a heartbeat you’d let me go I’m senseless Because I choose to be I’m senseless Because you let me down Are you really mad? Or are we just playing games? It’s not fun anymore Because of the pains I’ve been bending backwards All my live long life I think I’m just now breaking It’s almost nice It hurts to know You don’t love me anymore It hurts to know In a heartbeat you’d let me go I’m senseless Because I choose to be I’m senseless Because you let me down I’m down now, all the spinning plates Are falling all around me It hurts to know You don’t love me anymore It hurts to know In a heartbeat you’d let me go I’m senseless Because I choose to be I’m senseless Because you let me down "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I really liked this i especially liked the bit about the spinning plates good write. |
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