Teen Poetry #8 |
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Coming Back |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Coming Back hunnie Coming back to this place, lines of my childhood is where they are traced, old memories come as quickly as before, when my life was great and I couldn't ask for more, I couldn't tell you how I felt I belonged here, I felt no pain, felt no fear, I wasn't critisized for everything I do, if only i could tell you if only you knew, I really do feel I can't be happy, I feel you won't let me be me, maybe i'll tell you one day I will, but for the present my lips will stay still. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
don't do that- makes it worse. honesty is the way to go- blutness hurts, but it hurts worse and longer to let these things go unsaid. alot of times things are the result of comunication lax. -g'luck! Whit "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Thanks, although I wouldn't know how to start really. well how to say it..... hunnie ![]() ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Tee Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 26Belgium |
Show him this poem hunnie ![]() |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thanks Tee, maybe I will ![]() hunnie ![]() |
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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
I hope your doing ok and I've hope to see more poems from you.wwzwlmd8!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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lemonraindrops Junior Member
since 2007-01-28
Posts 19 |
I'm liking the message! Great piece. Much Love Elyse "I've got a jar of dirrr-rrt! I've got a jar of dirrr-rrt! And do you know what's IN my jar of dirt?" |
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