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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
Trying to tell you things of myself, I have died one thousand deaths I never got near to saying these, And stopped counting the times you left I cry at night, I thought you should know, I wish the things of this hurt would leave You tell of all these things that are broken Over you and those, and for myself- I grieve The moon is as changing as my life, As changing as the feelings you wear All are present upon your hidden face, You must only look to find them there You finally see what I have been to you, I almost thought you never would find out I guess I was wrong, and glad to be so You now know what you have been without |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I've been meaning to comment on ur stuff 4 ages... been reading just not commenting.. lol... Well anyway i have now... I liked it alot.. u have great skills.. Nice to see another Aussie around the place... |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
great poem |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
You finally see what I have been to you, I almost thought you never would find out I guess I was wrong, and glad to be so You now know what you have been without ~ Lovely, I really liked this. Structure was good and well put together hope to read more soon... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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