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I Walk The Lonely Roads
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I Walk The Lonely Roads |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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I Walk The Lonely Roads I rest my head, my tear stained face is hidden once again for the day has finally gone A figment of my imagination makes me believe that I am not alone So much more criticism, hurt and disbelief a burden placed upon me every single day But wake up to reality now its time to face the music, no matter what you say I’m real, I’m alive and don’t you dare doubt it I’ll live my life the way I want and there’s not a thing you can say about it I’m not afraid of you anymore and I’m proud to stand tall Just look at me now, I didn’t break after the fall. I’m more of a person than you ever will be I’ve got dreams and ambitions, more than you’ll ever see There’s more potential in me and a friend is all I seek So what if your Mr popular, I saw you take a leak There isn’t much to be proud of and you can’t change me I’m happy to be who I am and guess what, I don’t care if you flea Stand up, be a man show the world what you’re made of maybe its sugar and spice and all things nice I don’t think so I already know, arrogance, abuse, and the tails from mice I rest my head, my tear stained face is hidden once again for the day has finally gone A figment of my imagination makes me believe that I am not alone There is so much I want to say but I just can’t, I keep coming back for more and this is your delight But just remember you made my life a living nightmare as I walk the lonley roads to hell tonight…… |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Been listening to Greenday have we? lol And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone." |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Sorry, i couldn't think of a title for my poem.. my brother picked it it can be deleted or i can change it if you like??? |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Oh no, don’t do that. I was just kidding, lol. No, I like it, you should keep it as it is. And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone." |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
not your best. the rythmn went off toward the last bit. I still liked the first stanza alot though. Flea is spelled flee though |
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