The Blessing(Part 2 of crying)

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Teen Poetry #8

The Blessing(Part 2 of crying)

BabyT'Breezey
Junior Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 11
USA

0 posted 2006-12-21 01:45 AM

a few weeks past after Daisy was born,
a healthy little angel,
someone i could adore,
i told her storys of her biological father,
how he bailed out after he finding out he was gonna have a daughter,

instead of hiding the truth i wanted her to know,
i told her the way i met Jay,
how he was there when she was born,
and how much he adore her,
everynight has i lay her down,
i tell Jay im glad he around,
to care for me and her,

sure i wish that my parents would have been supportive,
but they wanted the best for me,
and i could see that when i left,
i should probably forgive them,
and eventualy i will,
but for now i say to my beautiful little angel and my baby,
god is the only one who can judge you,
and remember nomatter what i love you and i am happy your here.

(Story will Continue)........
P.S. If you think i could edit somthing feel free to help but please be nice about it!!!!!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-12-21 08:36 PM

awe this was beautiful. glad that you wrote a part two. it is a nice story to continue good luck...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

2 posted 2006-12-21 08:39 PM

looking foward to part 3 still seeking more details, but all in all it was Lovely- lol

-Lovely

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

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