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baby_gurl908 Junior Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 15 |
Why is it that you the one I love is the only one who hasnt seen the changed me.?? You can walk all over my heart but not see the change in me? Is it maybe because you dont see me you just see what i used to be... The part of me that you didnt want me to change...the part you wanted me to be forever. Why cant you just see the new me is it that difficalt for you to see im different im not the same little girl. Im not that little hoe no more I'm not trying to kill myself... Thats not the girl I am anymore and if you cant accept that then there the DOOR. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
there were a bit of grammar errors and wrong tenses missing letters etc. but i really liked this i can acually relate to this, kinda weird thing to relate to. i hope to read more... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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