Teen Poetry #8 |
Crying |
BabyT'Breezey Junior Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 11USA |
I can hear the sound of a crying baby next to my head, i turned around and looked in the bed, i asked my self "what had i done" and told my self this wasnt gonna be fun, i wish i could somewhat change what happend, i didnt know how to explain why i had gotten suspended, and all i could say was im sorry and that they didnt have to worry as i packed my stuff to leave i couldn't believe that i was going out on my own i didnt know how to explain to my little angel why mommy was alone, i hoped that when she was born i would have someone, to keep her and i warm, i swear to myself the day i left, that i would give my child the best, the time came when i was screaming because of pain, the young cab driver face was plain, he looked at me and his face was trying to say everything would go fine, i wanted to smile i had to shine, as i was screaming and smiling, and trying to have joy, i realized noone was gonna be by myside when we arrived at the hospital i let out a big sigh, the nurses rushed me in, in a matter of time i wanted to cry, the door opened and there he was, with that blue stuff and kinda lookin like a powderpuff, he told me breath and stay calm, minutes later she was born and she was twenty and half inches long, i told him that i wanted to be with him because i was in the middle of all this and it just sorta came out, i was expecting a pout and a shout, but instead he handed me my baby and said without a dout, you have a beautiful baby and i wanna help out. T'BreezeyBaby |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Welcome to Pip! That was really good! Good emotion |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup, a tough moment richly described. Glad you're here. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
my darling, what a hard life. welcome to pip. -Lovely "Love is the irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow is that a true story? it was expressed so well. so what happened after that? god bless, hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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