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Teen Poetry #8

Our Cousinly Friendship

BabyT'Breezey
Junior Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 11
USA

0 posted 2006-12-15 12:40 PM

You and I have been through alot,
so when this all started I was shocked,
You started ignoring my calls,
But when you answered you said it wasnt your fault,
our cousinly friendship is starting to fade,
i remember all those nights we talked,
and those miles we walked,
but now it seems that you are disappearing day by day,
its like i am not the best friend you said i would always be,
and the only thing i can see,
is something like you trying to get rid of me.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2006-12-15 07:33 PM

Ouch, I kinda know that feeling. It is well expressed but hopefully only the beginning of something different that can be better. Welcome to Passions. Hope you like it here. And hang in there. Peace...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nick_lyss
Member

since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

2 posted 2006-12-16 02:43 PM

welcome to piptalk. hope 2 see more of our poems. you seem like a talented poet,

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-12-19 10:46 PM

Welcome to PIP, this poem was really good. it had a lot of feeling too...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

4 posted 2006-12-21 09:13 PM

i've felt that- i was then called PERSISTANT. isn't that funny? (not)

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

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