"and i’m dying to say so long,
because i know soon
you’ll be gone,
leaving with the winter’s stillness,
a heavy heart in all
its fullness

Beautiful ending goes out on a strong note that I like in this poem, the start was amazing too.

I admit that I didn't feel like I understood all of this but what I did understand I liked. It feels like there's a deeper meaning in this poem I'm missing, I just can't figure out what it is...

Thanks for sharing this piece; it was an enjoyable poem for me to read

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino            @-->---

Normally with your poetry I have a hard time understand it. Call me simple but because it doesn't rhyme I get lost lol But this one, maybe cause I can relate, you explained this feeling so well with these lines:

why can’t i believe in anything
other then your lying lips
which i’ve never even kissed
and my attachment to you
is becoming a hit or miss

Loved this. Keep it up!

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