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Teen Poetry #8

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pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

0 posted 2006-12-10 09:50 PM

~it started as a rant i was having about stuff and then it just started to take shape as a poem so i decided to post it~

take away my happiness
and I just won't smile
it's something I haven't done in a while

take away my food
and I just won't eat
take away my freedom
and I just won't run

take away my privacy
and I won't hide
who I am inside

take away my sight
and I just won't see
take away my self
and I just won't be me

take away my vioce
and I won't speak
take part of my soul
and I just won't be whole

take away who I am
and I won't even give a damn

because I'm already gone

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

[This message has been edited by pencil&paper (12-11-2006 11:44 PM).]

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

1 posted 2006-12-11 08:59 PM

wow how far gone are you? don't slip beyond that which is real.

-Lovely

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-12-13 12:53 PM

take away who I am
and I won't even give a damn
because I'm already gone~

OMG pencil i loved this it has got to be my fav by you i can relate to this amazing the end summed up nicely i can't wait to read more... don't go to far gone it sux

...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

3 posted 2007-08-26 05:46 PM

I remember this 1! I just found it so i thought I ought to reply! LOVE IT! 1 of my faves by you! RERRA

teddymarvelle
Junior Member

since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

4 posted 2007-08-27 12:46 PM

we have all had this moment of despair let it remain only a moment... for you are loved... and this too shall pass... very good however

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

5 posted 2007-08-27 02:08 AM

i really loved this one!!

hope u find your way soon

xx

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