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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-11-29 12:27 PM

it's days like this i cannot breathe inside,
it makes me wish that i had died,
no one knows me i don't even have humility,
it ain't that fun to have a cloak of invisability,

if i just had one smile from a passing friend,
my life wouldn't be this close to being the end,
i sit here alone in my personal hell,
am i okay to approach no one can tell,

i used to have friends before this depression,
if only i could be happyand go back into regression,
before all my friends left me alone in this school,
they thought giddy was fun depression wasn't too cool,

maybe if i didn't always feel so alone,
i could reminise to the memories i have always known.
feeling once like i was real,
now i can only wait for my mind to heal,

it's days like this i cannot breathe inside,
it makes me wish that i had died.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-29 06:23 PM

PLEASE DONT DIE, I WILL MISS UR POETRY!!!!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-12-01 11:41 PM

hmmm thanx Tempest...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2006-12-02 12:40 PM

Belive me, hunnie you still have friends, me, you'll always be the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

4 posted 2006-12-02 03:55 AM

DON'T DIE BECAUSE I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO READ ANY OF YOUR GREAT POEMS ANY MORE!!!!!!!!!!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-12-03 11:40 PM

hehe guys i won't haha does that convince you enough this poem i acually wrote for the poetry challenge...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

6 posted 2007-05-10 11:21 PM

it's days like this i cannot breathe inside,
it makes me wish that i had died.

ok so i love that part.
actually.. hell, the whole thing is great.
i love ur poems!
keep them coming!!!

Becca.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

7 posted 2007-05-11 05:43 PM

I really loved this, as usual!
ahh hunnie you are driving me to insanity! lol im becoming so mush/lovey lately cause i always love your poems. haha

beautiful, like always

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

yoshi_gurl
New Member

since 2007-05-18

Posts 3
Indiana

8 posted 2007-05-18 04:12 PM

I rrrrrrrrrreaaaaallly like this. This one hits home for me....!!!! But don't die if I made you can make it.

love is so short and forgetting is so long...Xotchil-out

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