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forever*wishing
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where my heart is

0 posted 2006-11-21 12:23 PM


we are a slowly falling world
advancing each day but always wanting more
our growing desires bring us down
farther makes farther with a deafening sound

each pain we try to push behind
brings us to another to shove and then hide

great is a man that can see past materials
straight through amongst many a false idol
but greater a man that will share it with the blind
that will offer help jepardizing his life

listen to one who truly believes in the unseen
for he sees what makes both heart and mind agree
through all pain heartbreak and suffering
this is what shows that it all has meaning

in awe we will fall at his sight
he is our savior, Jesus Christ

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1 posted 2006-11-21 08:12 PM


Becca~
What a refreshing piece to find in this forum~

You write of your faith and that is a good, good thing to share~

Bless you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain
2 posted 2006-11-22 12:16 PM


great write!

you should share that faith more often.
good job
-missy

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