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Teen Poetry #8

Welcome to my World

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2006-11-20 07:44 PM

Welcome to my world
this plastic, fake place
full of false pretenses
and warped, blank masks
designed by society
and it's pressured way
of imprinting what
it thinks you should be
not who you really are

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-20 08:18 PM

good to see you back here!!!!!!!! man shadow i missed ur work! this piece was really good , and sooo true. society does pressure you to be what ur not. so will u check out some of my new one if u decide to stick round here for a while?

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

2 posted 2006-11-20 08:29 PM

Of course I'll check out your work Tempest.
Oh and I probably "will stick around" for at least Thanksgiving weekend. Apparently my procrastination habits are getting to me junior year-I blame my A.P. English teacher with her Indian History and annotations ):

^_^
~J.

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