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but it hurt |
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penguin5 Junior Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 21Washington |
But it hurt How did it come to this Never should I have done it As you lay there crying And I have nothing to comfort you with Your friends say to talk to you But what the hell do I say There is no going back There is no starting again In an attack of bitter laughter I realize the morbid irony That the thing that hurts the most Is silence |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Tell us what hurt |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
this really initialized the pretense of a free based write, really interesting though as it followed good flow. i accede what was previously said. to fully understand the depth and perception, and also the true reason of the piece itself, you need to state what has caused this feeling of hollow remorse. |
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