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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-06-25 06:19 PM

Your face is one I want to know and always see
Though I don’t remember exactly what it does to me
Your words have sparked and inspired
My heart’s one true desire
And I’ve learned to see through true eyes
Beyond the flaws of man’s compromise

I have been careful and truthful; to you I’ve never lied
And if I could just figure out how I feel inside
I would tell you, you would be the first to know
I would promise that to you if I could let the feeling go
We live far apart- to my dismay
And silly as it is I miss your face and voice today

Come and talk with me and look at me with those eyes
The ones that will know all of my now and then disguises
With you it seems that all my hope are changing to please you
And I’m finding myself not caring, no it’s true
We danced a few nights ago if you can remember
I pray that we’ll meet again maybe at my birthday in December

Leave me wondering why you leave me in awe
But we had to go and leave each other for so is the law
I’ll miss your face
In this common place
Leave quickly please just go
So you don’t see me cry and shake so

and if i had to choose between the whole world and you- there would be no competition

-Amanda Ann (my best friend)

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (06-26-2007 08:47 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-06-25 09:07 PM

"I have been careful and truthful; to you I’ve never lied
And if I could just figure out how I feel inside
I would tell you, you would be the first to know
I would promise that to you if I could let the feeling go
We live far apart- to my dismay
And silly as it is I miss your face and voice today"

this is one of the best poems I've read in a while....I completely love this part...and the quote at the bottom is awesome.

SEA

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with you

2 posted 2007-06-25 10:39 PM

and for a title, how about 'true eyes'

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-06-26 08:48 AM

thanks, my friend is very talented, sometimes the things that come out of her mouth astound me. that was who said the quote.

-Red

ps and thanks for the fabulous title.

and if i had to choose between the whole world and you- there would be no competition

-Amanda Ann (my best friend)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2007-06-26 08:58 AM

you are welcome, apparently you've got some talent too!

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