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Teen Poetry #8

Something or Other

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-11-08 09:24 PM

There was a time when the doors were all closed,
When my hands were all shattered by the winds of fate.
I stood by the wall and waited for their passing;
I relinquish restraint, stopped writing of child things,
They were over in me; I was a man at fourteen.

An eye for a peer, a heart for a love; I was wasted.
My hands were for sensual touching, for proof;
I had a fire for a soul; heated towards passions,
The fruitions of it all.

And as days where longer, stretched thin, layered,
They began to make volumes, each second a chapter,
Each day a volume, each year a book, each lifetime a masterpiece.
And death was the burning of the words, finite, and mortal.

I am the two-toed wanderer

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-08 09:31 PM

i love this poem dude! will u do me a favor and read my poem "this is my story(a narritive)"? i want more people to read it man. i wanted to tell u that ur poetry kicks ass.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2006-11-12 06:20 PM

Hey,
Nice to hear from you again... As i have said many time you are one of my favourite poets here in PIP and ur stuff ROCKS!!!

Jess

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

3 posted 2006-11-12 10:36 PM

Wow, what an amazing poem! IDK what to say about it except that it was very well written. Looks liek you put alot of effort into it and your vocab use is impressive.
Nice!
I look forward to reading more of your work!

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

4 posted 2006-11-12 11:14 PM

actually this didnt take long to write, most of my stuff doesn't, it just comes out. thank you for the comment, i thought, my poems were destitute here, but i see now they arn't.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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