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Love Distained |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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It was the glaring intimidation, The sounds of arrogant time, A benevolence granted by distain, The beauty of sadness so vein That I once knew so fondly, so fair. Just causes were amid my hair, The lesson: that attraction will snare; All hearts are lured, lulled into love. I hold her in memories, not dreams; We never were closer than how it seems, A friend, my love, not lover, not one. How beautifully bad we related. I am the two-toed wanderer [This message has been edited by themute (11-08-2006 03:46 PM).] |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Just causes were amid my hair, The lessons affections will snare Seemed forced right there you might want to change. |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
Thats alot better I believe I am the two-toed wanderer |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
love ur stuff man it rocks!!! |
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