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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2008-11-28 02:11 PM



I didn't want to hurt you
didn't mean to do you wrong
the truth is there was no love
that I could give you all along

I tried to change my feelings
tried to fall in love with you
but theres nothing you could say
and nothing I could do

you smoked too much
knew your way through town
and the last thing I needed
was another man to bring me down

I didn't want to hurt you
I didn't mean to make you cry
but I was so damn tired
of living in a lie.

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2008-11-28 07:54 PM


I So Know This Feeling...

Really good hunni... Missed you sooo much...

xx


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2 posted 2008-11-28 09:18 PM


Your poem practically described my last relationship.. *sigh*

This is a great poem, as always.

Its great to have you back! Now please stay a few? lol We miss you very much.. haha

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

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