Broken( my duet with Jess, a.k.a revengeismine)

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Teen Poetry #8

Broken( my duet with Jess, a.k.a revengeismine)

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-11-16 01:54 AM

First off, jess is an amazing writer and her parts are much better than mine, but this poem was for someone that needs to open her eyes and put the past behind her and start again, fresh but i hope you like it enjoy

"Broken"
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Shard of fractured glass
A broken life undone
A shallow heart breaking
Beneath the rising sun

Hurt worlds of pain
Physically cannot be undone
Your falling like the rain
But you burn like poison rum

Your shallow heart did this
It's your fault and yours alone
This isn't the life you want to live
This isn't a place to call home

It's time t face the truth
It's no good telling yourself lies
The situation has gone through the roof
Because now everyone hears your cries

You can't fix the broken
We all know it's true
But you can start again
Rebuild a brand new you

Time to revise your life
put the old one up for ransom
it's time to put down the knife
For the price you pay makes people shun

So clean the glass up off the floor
After all it's still covered in blood
It's time to write the future
Cover the past with mud

So put this behind your back
Give yourself a break
Confidence may be something you lack
But that doesn't mean it's something you can't remake

Shut those memories in a box
Let us pick you up
Because another year like this it seems
You won't be standing up at all

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-11-16 08:53 AM

Honestly I've been reading both of your poetry for a long time. And when I read this I couldn't tell who wrote what. You both are amazing in your own ways!!!
And Keagan I'm glad you wrote this for her. She does need to open her eyes because we all are worried for her sake....

Great write both of you!!!

Love ya' bunches!!
-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

2 posted 2008-11-16 06:52 PM

Is this for who I'm thinking it's for?
Someone please answer me, because I won't stop crying until you do..

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-11-21 11:05 PM

LOOK!!! THREE!! there, now will you believe me? it's a beautiful poem so stop arguing.

{~~*~~}

Miss.Emmalee

"Who the **** are you?!!?.. GET AWAY FROM MY LIMO!!"

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