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Teen Poetry #8

Cowboy's Are Still Boy's

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-11-14 05:10 PM

Okay so I was sorta in a good mood writing this and it made me smile and chuckle a little at the end.. hehe. Enjoy!

Sitting on this old bar stool
Chatting up a storm with the guys.
Here comes little miss swinging her hips
She grabs plenty of attention but you better be wise.

Guys can't stop but stare.
While she turns on her heel.
Cow skin boots; shiney and tight
Rosey lips pressed tight like a letter's seal

Figure like an hour glass.
Its ticking like a clock.
Mouth drops; tongues hanging.
"Oh please don't make me stuff that with a sock"

Brown cascading curls flow down her side.
She's got her spell working on the guys.
While I'm stuck here with a smile on my face.
Some guys are pig's, which to most of you applies

Cowboys are still boys; nothing's gonna change that.
All you do is talk about how much you are a "stud".
Well this horse of a lady ain't gonna let you have a ride.
In her eyes your nothing but a dud.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-11-14 07:33 PM

AHHHH!!!!! (lol, i was gonna make that longer, but that gets annoying, lol) like i said before when i was talking to you, this poem is incredible. i love the way you wrote it and the words you used. it flows so well and the whole content is great. not to mention the description, lol.
i'm just gonna leave it at that and say - to end it off - my favorite from you by far.
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.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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