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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 2008-11-11 04:41 PM


first off i want to  thank escape the fate--the band
for i have  took two lyrics (situations-escape the fate) and put them together for my title, 2nd off this is just words in my head, not about anybody certain but fake people in general.... that ruin lives of others,          and p.s.  the ones that read that last poem, i gave it to her and she loved it

ENJOY

             "Lying is your favorite passion"
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Do you ever wonder what will happen?
did you ever think of what it would be like with it
Would you like the sound of the devil laughing?
or do you want to be the one thrown in to a bottomless pit?

I'm falling forever because of you
never ending of suffering and pain
Do you feel the guilt that comes with the truth
Your so fake, what a shame

so tell me how to get back up on top of the ridge
i hate that you give me no escape
how can i get out if i have ropes around my limbs
just once i would like to escape this fate

you put me into this game well i want it over
threw me into this hell
if i had some luck, maybe a four-leaf clover
can no one hear me scream and yell?

you honestly say that it did not happen
just keep telling the world lies
is lying the latest fashion?
leave this world, before the rest of the world dies

I'll just keep falling down
and you just keep on living your life
and i'll never hit the ground
but you and i both know your life is a lie!


© Copyright 2008 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-11-11 04:56 PM


Wow Keagan loved the last stanza.. Powerful stuff you got there buddy. lol. Keep up the writing!!

You secret lover, lmfao jk!!
-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

RevengeIsMine
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2 posted 2008-11-14 06:51 PM


Keagan.. My favourite Boy.. Loves It.. As Always... Hearts For U!
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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3 posted 2008-11-15 09:20 PM


first of all, situations is like...the greatest song ever. second...this poem was amazing. i loved it, great job!!
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